Fish Food

September 23, 2010

Fish Food

Filed under: Uncategorized — penelopephoebe @ 12:18 pm

Fish Food

I fed my fish a spider

I thought it might be fun

It sped across the water

And made me turn and run

It made me feel so frightened

I ran and screamed some more

So now I am enlightened

I will do this no more

The moral of this ditty

Is try to remain good

Always show humanity

When feeding fish their food

Comments (18)

18 Comments »

poignant yet fun to read… i love this great piece!
thanks for visiting my blog, penelopephoebe. 🙂

Comment by PinkLady — September 23, 2010 @ 12:27 pm | Reply
- Thank you for your kind comment. I enjoyed my visit to your space.
  
  Comment by penelopephoebe — September 23, 2010 @ 12:36 pm | Reply
fun one!

Comment by Jingle — September 23, 2010 @ 1:16 pm | Reply
hehehe feeding the fish with spider!!!! lol
well written 😀

Comment by Rajlakshmi — September 25, 2010 @ 6:25 am | Reply
- Cheers
  
  Comment by penelopephoebe — September 25, 2010 @ 6:35 am | Reply
serves the fish owner right 🙂
bad thing to feed a poor fish a spider.
loved the poem.

Comment by Trisha — September 25, 2010 @ 2:48 pm | Reply
- Thanks, Trisha, he he he.
  
  Comment by penelopephoebe — September 25, 2010 @ 2:53 pm | Reply
Had a vicious streak did you? What fun you made of it. That poor spider…
Carrie

Comment by Carrie — October 6, 2010 @ 5:34 am | Reply
- Oops…sorry Carrie.
  
  Comment by penelopephoebe — October 6, 2010 @ 7:08 am | Reply
That was soo funny! Loved reading it. 🙂 ~Punam

Comment by Punam — October 7, 2010 @ 7:46 pm | Reply
- he he he
  
  Comment by penelopephoebe — October 7, 2010 @ 8:02 pm | Reply
We could have sliced spider open, choosing its most delicate parts, and fried it with onion and fresh veggies. Nah – I’ll bet that spider was probably a delicious change from stinky fish flakes:) Loved it peneolopephoebe! Thank you kindly for vising my site. -J.

Comment by J. — October 11, 2010 @ 10:55 pm | Reply
- An intriguing thought,; glad you liked it. Love your work. Pen.
  
  Comment by penelopephoebe — October 12, 2010 @ 7:46 am | Reply
  - I just had to come back and thank you so much for highlighting my blog on Onestop. It was most gracious of you! You commented on a recent post saying, “You certainly make me think”. I cannot thank you enough for such a warm comment. It is that very comment that keeps me reading the work of others and in doing so – inspires me to write. I do not have the time now (that school has begun) to spend online reading as I did so much of back in August, but I look forward to reading more of your blog, and the many others featured on Onestop. Thanks again –
    
    Daniel Jay.
    
    Comment by Daniel Jay — October 12, 2010 @ 3:28 pm
  - I spoke honestly about your work, Daniel, though I am quite discerning about who I would highlight:>)
    
    Comment by penelopephoebe — October 12, 2010 @ 3:53 pm
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