Penelope’s Poems

September 23, 2010

Fish Food

Filed under: Uncategorized — penelopephoebe @ 12:18 pm

Fish Food

I fed my fish a spider

I thought it might be fun

It sped across the water

And made me turn and run

It made me feel so frightened

I ran and screamed some more

So now I am enlightened

I will do this no more

The moral of this ditty

Is try to remain good

Always show humanity

When feeding fish their food

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18 Comments »

  1. poignant yet fun to read… i love this great piece!
    thanks for visiting my blog, penelopephoebe. 🙂

    Comment by PinkLady — September 23, 2010 @ 12:27 pm | Reply

    • Thank you for your kind comment. I enjoyed my visit to your space.

      Comment by penelopephoebe — September 23, 2010 @ 12:36 pm | Reply

  2. fun one!

    Comment by Jingle — September 23, 2010 @ 1:16 pm | Reply

  3. hehehe feeding the fish with spider!!!! lol
    well written 😀

    Comment by Rajlakshmi — September 25, 2010 @ 6:25 am | Reply

    • Cheers

      Comment by penelopephoebe — September 25, 2010 @ 6:35 am | Reply

  4. serves the fish owner right 🙂
    bad thing to feed a poor fish a spider.
    loved the poem.

    Comment by Trisha — September 25, 2010 @ 2:48 pm | Reply

    • Thanks, Trisha, he he he.

      Comment by penelopephoebe — September 25, 2010 @ 2:53 pm | Reply

  5. Had a vicious streak did you? What fun you made of it. That poor spider…
    Carrie

    Comment by Carrie — October 6, 2010 @ 5:34 am | Reply

    • Oops…sorry Carrie.

      Comment by penelopephoebe — October 6, 2010 @ 7:08 am | Reply

  6. That was soo funny! Loved reading it. 🙂 ~Punam

    Comment by Punam — October 7, 2010 @ 7:46 pm | Reply

    • he he he

      Comment by penelopephoebe — October 7, 2010 @ 8:02 pm | Reply

  7. We could have sliced spider open, choosing its most delicate parts, and fried it with onion and fresh veggies. Nah – I’ll bet that spider was probably a delicious change from stinky fish flakes:) Loved it peneolopephoebe! Thank you kindly for vising my site. -J.

    Comment by J. — October 11, 2010 @ 10:55 pm | Reply

    • An intriguing thought,; glad you liked it. Love your work. Pen.

      Comment by penelopephoebe — October 12, 2010 @ 7:46 am | Reply

      • I just had to come back and thank you so much for highlighting my blog on Onestop. It was most gracious of you! You commented on a recent post saying, “You certainly make me think”. I cannot thank you enough for such a warm comment. It is that very comment that keeps me reading the work of others and in doing so – inspires me to write. I do not have the time now (that school has begun) to spend online reading as I did so much of back in August, but I look forward to reading more of your blog, and the many others featured on Onestop. Thanks again –

        Daniel Jay.

        Comment by Daniel Jay — October 12, 2010 @ 3:28 pm

      • I spoke honestly about your work, Daniel, though I am quite discerning about who I would highlight:>)

        Comment by penelopephoebe — October 12, 2010 @ 3:53 pm

  8. http://thursdaypoetsrallypoetry.wordpress.com/2010/10/27/the-celebrate-poet-of-september-award-nomination-announcement/

    how are you?
    please vote when you have a moment,

    you are nominated, automatically, u win 1 vote,
    when you vote for other poets, u win another vote for yourself,

    thanks for the attention.

    Comment by Jingle — October 28, 2010 @ 3:25 am | Reply

  9. Jingle Poetry Monday Potluck is open Now,
    http://jinglepoetry.blogspot.com/2010/10/poetry-potluck-halloween.html

    Welcome Linking in any poem, join the fun today!

    Comment by Jingle — November 2, 2010 @ 12:17 am | Reply

  10. just called in to wish you another good week xxjen

    Comment by jennyozzy — May 30, 2011 @ 7:01 pm | Reply


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