Penelope’s Poems

April 8, 2009

Alone

Filed under: poetry — penelopephoebe @ 10:25 am

Alone

 

 

The sea stretches the

Horizon to infinity

Booming and crashing

Against the cliffs

A seagull’s coarse

Laughter cleaving

The moment

Signalling the

Abandonment

Footsteps in the sand

Lead away

As if set in stone

The wind torments

And tangles

And tastes of a

Different salt

Lachrymose figure

Alone

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10 Comments »

  1. Just love the whole sensation of this poem – a beatifully concise description of land/seascape and mood.

    Comment by Malcolm — April 8, 2009 @ 4:30 pm | Reply

  2. A very powerful poem, Pen. I like the concrete images of sea, seagull, footsteps and the wind, which constitute a vivid picture to express the idea of being alone. Well done!:)Jen

    Comment by Jennifer — April 9, 2009 @ 1:38 am | Reply

  3. simply fantastic. its beautiful.
    very best wishes,
    trisha

    Comment by trisha — April 9, 2009 @ 2:41 pm | Reply

  4. Lachrymose! Awesome word….Dig the poem.

    Comment by bindo — April 10, 2009 @ 4:05 pm | Reply

  5. I love your work here Penny. Just beautiful.. Wow.

    Comment by Lisa RedWillow — August 7, 2010 @ 9:12 pm | Reply

  6. lovely said!
    love infinite version of everything…

    Comment by Jingle — September 20, 2010 @ 7:02 pm | Reply

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    Comment by Jingle — September 20, 2010 @ 7:02 pm | Reply

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    Comment by Jingle — September 23, 2010 @ 2:34 am | Reply

    • No pressure, eh Jingle? :>)

      Comment by penelopephoebe — September 23, 2010 @ 5:35 am | Reply

  9. Penny this is so beautiful. Your words still consume me.
    Thanks for stopping and all is well. 🙂
    Have a lovely day. xo

    Comment by RedWillow — September 26, 2011 @ 12:26 pm | Reply


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